So the other day I showed you the covers for my 2 books and hear are the back covers!
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This is for Unsinkable Courage
I ran down the deck and panicked she was no where to be seen. My legs felt like they where giving up on me feeling like I couldn't take another step. the cold air that surrounded me made me break out into a cold Sweet but I had to find Sophia. Suddenly I saw a small baby crying hysterically I ran to the small bundle laying on the floor and scooped it up in my arms, I couldn't abandon her she would die and she didn't deserve that she deserved to live. I carried her with me making the way to the last life boat challenging, just then I saw Sophia in a life boat down below and I knew that she would be safe until the RMS Carpathian would come to get us. I climbed into the life boat #20 and we where lowered. |
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Okay and hear is for the Nebula
I looked into the small room and saw a red ball glowing in the darkness I reached out to touch.
"Don't" A deep voice said out of the blackness I jumped back and stayed there.
A dark figure came into the light of the ball he had dark black hair and bright blue eyes and had scars running down both sides of his cheeks he smiled when he saw me
"Move" he said in a voice that sounded scared."Move" he repeated I tried to but I was stuck and couldn't I herd banging like the sound of guns and beets of feet coming closer and closer. my heart started to pound then the door burst open making me crumple up in a ball to the floor. |
Actually your punctuation wasn't too bad. ;) Good job!
ReplyDeleteI'll read more when you write it... hint hint hint....
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